Amazing Animation

You have amazing animation and art . I also like the cartoony style. There is only a small problm that could make the flash better. The voice acting is a little bit iffy. I i was you i would look for some very good vocie actors after I put all of that work making a good flash. Also the story wasnt to great. I dont really know what you were going for but if you could get front page if it was funnyer. This cartoon was rather dry , and dull. It had a little smirk at the end but that is really it. So in short , get some really good voice actors and make a more funny story and get ready for the awards :)

Nice work buuuut,

It is really realy good the only problm is that it is not really on ng and most people will not click the link, but it is very well done. I am also workin on 3d animation and if you would like to maby work togeather , AIM me or email me a rindotheraven@yahoo(take this out).com or reply here. I think u and me could make some cool stuff. I could also help u wit file size.