Amazing Animation
You have amazing animation and art . I also like the cartoony style. There is only a small problm that could make the flash better. The voice acting is a little bit iffy. I i was you i would look for some very good vocie actors after I put all of that work making a good flash. Also the story wasnt to great. I dont really know what you were going for but if you could get front page if it was funnyer. This cartoon was rather dry , and dull. It had a little smirk at the end but that is really it. So in short , get some really good voice actors and make a more funny story and get ready for the awards :)